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I'm trying to erase the thought of you.
Maybe I should have never fallen in love with you.
We're both too young.
At this age nothing really matters to anyone.
But me.
I feel that falling in love with you is wrong, but if you're not the one then why does my heart tell me that you are? Love is confusing.
I just wanna pour out ALL of my feelings, to someone who would understand how I feel.
Maybe you could listen.
But you are so far away.
If only I could hold you and never let you go.
Everytime I see a couple hug or kiss, I have to shut my eyes.
I envy them too much.
Because of you I have to shut out the thought of love when you are not near.
It makes me cry.
Please find me and ease my pain.
Come to me.
I don't want to erase the thought of you.
©2005-2009 ~Monnie-the-Panda
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man i really like this guy n i haven't seen him for ages!

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:iconrisingtide:
I love it. I know what its like to be in love, but no that it just can't happen. It hurts so much inside, and true when you wrote about people hugging and kissing, it makes the pain even worse. Great poem!

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"I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you cant. How you hurt yourself on the outside to try to kill the thing on the inside."
:iconsugardoll:
Really , like it! I felt like that, before.
Keep Going.

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I'm not perfect, I'm real.
:iconmonnie-the-panda:
thank you...i thought about my feelings and i thought i just had to write something...lol...i do that a lot!
:iconmmd339:
hey monnie
this is SUCH a good poem and im not just saying that. It condenses all your emotions of "him" so well into this one poem
:iconmonnie-the-panda:
yeah isnt' cool? i just poured my emotions out...well not really cos otherwise ther'd be a bit of a mess...but you no wat i mean...lol
:iconth3-hon3st-truth:
:) i love this poem, shows how i feel

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.. summer dreaming when you're with me <3
:iconmelevision:
so true. so true. =D

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If this is a rom-com, kill the direcor.

Lovin' photography.

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